by rocker666chick Feb 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I came to see, |
I like this peice, wish i could tell you why but i'm not sure. it flows well and the content is well portrayed thoughout the poems length. i feel that the end could be improved slightly though, it does work meaning and content why, just doesn't seem to fit with the flow of the overall peice. great peice anyway |