Taylor...I hate you!
1) your leaving or left the club
2) this poem is too friggen amazing even though its so short! I love it... the first...stanza if you call it that is like.. woah! lol keep it up and you know the nice thing people do is comment back=P

lol
Love Jenn

Wow, now you just made it so I can't have a long comment. I really needed to chastise you for the length. Three lines, not even stanzas or verses. Lol, anyways, I think I understand the meaning of this a little bit, and I really enjoy the poem. Please work on it a bit more, to fit in more lines, I would really enjoy that.

I read the poem over and over, I don't know how many times.

Thank you for your contribution,
Please continue to write poems.

I'm adoring the opening lines, truly beyond words.
I do feel you could have elaborated on this, but it is beautiful in it's simplicity.
Take care~Holly