I dare you

by nO1cOmPaReS2yOu   Feb 1, 2006


I dare you to look into my eyes and find me.
The real me.
She hides behind this carefree smile I have.
Can't you see it's all a front?
I talk to fill the silence,
Because in that silence, the girl who I am emerges.
&& She's not good enough to meet you.
If you only looked deep into my soul.
Don't you know that when I'm alone,
I just sit in cry.
This girl on the inside,
Longing to be free.
She's so sad and lonely,
Praying for someone,
An angel,
To come and unmask her.
Tenderly, piece by piece,
Unlock her and unwrap her.
The pieces of her wrapped in fine velvet,
And begin to reveal her slowley.
But until then,
she remains veiled,
Patiently waiting for her angel.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Omg this is amazing, i loved this one, its a very unique concept for a poem and it is very well written too, i lovedd it, great work , keep it up hun, take care

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Thank you a lot and all....but i gotta repay u somehow..you need to write some more poems..thts wat its gotta be..cause i cant just be commentin the same poems now

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Its all good with your typo... i know wat you meant...no need to say it..thanx for the comment though

  • 18 years ago

    by bouncy

    That was deep. i know how you feel. stay up w/ luv *bouncy*

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Excellent job...nice flow and detail...Really good..no changes in this poem..i noticed your in North Carolina..So am i..thts kool...anyway thanx for your comment i greatly appreciated it..makes me feel good
    Great job 5/5
    ttyl sometime
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

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