I loved this one too.

I whisper your name
It comes about every now and then
But it has lost its meaning
The love is gone again

This one stanza said a lot to me and I could really relate to it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Somehow the hardest word to say in the english language is goodbye...
great poem
5/5
love
amy
ps-pls comment on murder or suicide & vote as well... i'll do two more poems

Awe omg thats sad. i love it.

Love this one. Your a really great writer you know that! I can feel like i can relate to this one alot. Anywho, Keep writing, Im lovin' your poetry!!

- natz x0x

"In my dreams you stalk me
Your voice so pure and clear
Now it's tainted with the sound of lies
Silence is all I hear"

I like this part the most, its well discribed and I can relate to it. this alone is enough to give it a 5, it has a good style to it and you choose the words nicely. well done

Beautiful. It really captures the reader as you go through it - it flows really well too :)

Peace. [Sole]

My minds troubled by your face
[I think you mean mind's]

It's a beautiful poem, yes, and other than that one thing I can't find anything wrong with it. The organization is just great.

Again another poem about sad love, another gripping poem
Keep writing

Really powerfull, nice imagry.. good work!

Aww.. thats so sad.. i loved the ending, it was magically sad.. keep writing your amazing poems!
jessy