Comments : I tried to tell you....

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    WoW you can write excellent job..whew..that was just an amazing job have you ever tried to rap...you can..i see you have the ability to do it....Excellent
    5/5
    ttyl sometime
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by UnderAge Dying

    "Imagine
    Clutching his picture in your hand
    Grabbing the knife because no body understands
    Today is the day, to let it all fade away
    Looking at him just before I die
    And I leave a tear on his face
    Saying good bye"

    that line brings back a lot of memories.
    awesome writing seriously
    i love all of your poems & quotes!
    im pretty sure this poem made me
    bawl! haha