I really liked you poem. it made alot os sense. i esp. liked the part where it said -->"why do memories replay in my mind if it aint gonna change back time,
why does my heart choose to love you if your no longer meant to be mine" good job. keep it up!

Thats kute!

I THINK EVERYONE CAN RELATE TO UR POEM IN MANY WAYS... VERY WELL WRITTEN I LOVE IT.. GOOD JOB

Wonderful!

That was a really excellent write Shyann. Very heartfelt and honest. Its too bad nowa days guys dont know how to treat women, or should I say boys. you're a little young, give youself time to grow, you girls hehe tend to mature alot faster then us =P. You deserve a Man in your life & REAL men know how a woman should be treated. SO keep you're head up & chk out my poemzzZz hehe. B good and stay safe Shyann
- Thuggy

Great poem...I love the line "why do words fly out of people's mouths if they don't mean what they say"...that's only too true. I like this poem.

I LOVE ur poem. it soo good. Though the whole thing is really good and you have some good points my fav. part would prolly be where it says"why do memories replay in my mind if it aint gonna change back time," You are good!! and maybe you can come check mine out!

Gr88 wrk!!!

I do like it the way, words and every thing :)

5/5

Amazing poem...

left me speechless... beautifully written... you have amazing talent =]

great job...

5/5

xxx

OMG i loved this poem so much!
it perfectly described the way i feel at the moment
like exactly

this is such a great poem i luv it

xxx 5/5!!

This is an extremely well writren poem Shyann and if you dont mind... I would like to write a response to it. It sort of gave me alot of ideas and I think it would work really nicely. I'm goint to write, you tell me what you think. = )

Hope you are well sister. Hope you to hear from you soon.

Take care.
Your brother,

Thuggy = ).