Burning

by Taylor Anderson   Feb 2, 2006


You think you know everything about life and death,
And flames that lick your heart and flesh
Cut to feel the pain of death, and watch as the blood runs red,
This will all go up in smoke in the end
And you can watch as I burn to flames
Laugh as the attention comes to you alone
As I burn, with all of my written suicide
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This isn't about me, but about my crush, she decided to start cutting again and I'm really worried for her...

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Haha we both have a poem named burning.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Ooooh, very nice. I'm loving the imagery in this, it really jumps to life. Especially the first two lines, just wow!
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    He doesn't cut, I think he just really needed a topic.

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Tay-man

    Lol I was gonna say the same things as mike, but he beat me to it. Cutting isn't a good way to solve any kind of problem, and I would know... No matter what goes on in your life Taylor, write instead of cut, and talk to your friends and if Im completely braking up the wrong tree I'm sorry.

    Poem wise: LENGTH!!! Are you doing this to drive Mike and I nuts? lol cause it working, then again Im already nuts... I loved the first and last line sex-cillent job =) keep it up I'm happy to see someone writing

    Here if you need to talk
    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

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