Unheard

by Brook   Feb 2, 2006


So lost, so confused
She really doesn't know
What she should do.

Her friends have left her,
Moved onto their guys
Friendships realy don't last,
Even in the hardest times.

She cries out loudly at first,
But it soon becomes a whimper
Unheard by all around her
Because nobody heard her call.

Nobody notices the next day
When she isn't around
It's not like they saw her anyway
Too distracted to hear
What she had to say.

You know...
She died yesterday.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Sad... but nice! I think you could try and use more rhymes, it'll make the poem sound better. The storyline was nice and the ending was a bit creepy... hehe :)
    Good work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good. So sad though. I can kinda relate to it in some parts. Really great job though, I'm lost for words. 5/5!

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Oh that was sooo sad! but such an amazing poem! i could relate to a lot of it. great work huni,
    take care,
    luv xxEmmaxxx

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