Oh that was sooo sad! but such an amazing poem! i could relate to a lot of it. great work huni,
take care,
luv xxEmmaxxx

This was really good. So sad though. I can kinda relate to it in some parts. Really great job though, I'm lost for words. 5/5!

`taleee xx

Sad... but nice! I think you could try and use more rhymes, it'll make the poem sound better. The storyline was nice and the ending was a bit creepy... hehe :)
Good work! 5/5