by DevilWithin Feb 2, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The shadows that escaped my eyes |
by Milton
Wow, interesting poem you have there. I liked the you you explained what was going on and the feelings. Good stuff. |
Hun i would rate but im just in a weird mood and i dont want to take away from your good on going score... plus it would just be in the moment rating.. ill read more another day when im feeling better... |
by jess
Hey hun. great wrk as usual. keep it up! |
by BrokenMisery
Very good piece, you certainly have talent and i immensly enjoyed this piece! A suggestion is to becareful with "there" and "their" because you used the wrong one a couple of times and 'odor' i think is 'odour' but i could be wrong... Good luck with your writing and keep up the great work!!! |