Comments : An Artist's Canvas

  • 18 years ago

    by xlovelostx

    I really like this poem. I def. understood what you were talking about! 5/5!
    -Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Beautifully Broken*~

    Wow that was a good poem i liked how at first it was just a canvas a paintbrush and then turned into something else great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Yea were doing that in my english class, good write I loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    English and History were always my favourite classes. When we did poetry, it was my favourite time, I loved going to class. It was the best marks I ever got in highschool.

    I've written a poem like this before, but instead of using art, I used music. It was a weird one. It's called "I Played Violin". The metaphor was good, especially since you explained it. Not very poetic, but still a good write. Good imagery, and the flow was ok. Good stuff.