Its pretty good i like it!! don't you hate thinking about all the what ifs or whys just all the questions suck!!! keep writing though and nice work on your first piece!! comment back if you would please!!

Thanx soo much for the comment... ive wrote alot of poems but this is the first one i have actually shown on the internet.... so i was kinda like yea....... :)

REALLY GOOD!!!!! I LIKE IT!!! very interesting... i mean i never thought about tat stuff b4!!!

*thumbs up* I love it... It is truly amazing;)

Great start dear..welcome to the club

all the best and take care