Acid

by kallie   Feb 2, 2006


It's my heart that's being eaten
As you sit and watch
Maybe you don't know
Or maybe you just don't care
But it's all the things you say
And the affect they leave on me
You don't understand that each word you say adds another drop
Will you ever realize that it's you doing this
It's the acid coming from you that's eating my heart!

>>>>new type of poem for me please comment

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angela

    I think that this was very well writen. i uderstand this poem completely it is so much like what me and my two friends ae going thourgh write now i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    I love the way you wrote this poem with!
    the poem is very simple and enjoyable to read =)
    Keep it up
    and thanks so much for your comment, thou my reply is V late :S sorry exams were kinda stressing!

    Keep it up
    Lov
    NemO xxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Anne

    Gosh, that was so good!!
    makes me wanna comfort you ^^ dunno why
    Xx missed You

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Nice metaphor connectiont to acid, i like
    thanks for rating my poem
    if you have time, pease read my new one, Impulse

  • 18 years ago

    by Bob

    Hey I thought that was pretty true, when ever stuff happens it hits hard and it stays in you so you trapped that in your poem pretty well

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