It was lovely but i feel it could have had something else put into it...not sure exactly what though, well done anyway!

Aww i like this one. it reminds me of that yellowcard song. ocean avenue.. well sort of. but i can totally relate i love how you mark you lines with a dash like highligts in your life .. it really brings out the poems you write and its creative. nice job.. and thanks for your comment on my poem .. it didn't sound gay. :P it sounded human