Well, I gave it 4/5 not bcuz its bad, just an opinion :)
but hey I loved the ending it was lovely
keep it up and good luck ;)

Beautiful Steve! Loving and caring... A true love without the "facade". Beautiful!

Not one for this type of poetry but ya it was good nice flow and made sense all the way through 4/5 here and if you get the chance rate and comment on my poem (phoenix) please

Awww u made me cry....beautiful words 5/5

I loved this poem! It had so much emotion it was perfect! I loved it!!

Awww thiz poemz so beautiful....now thatz wat i call tru love well keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!!5/5

Makes me want to get out the photo albums ... and make a night of it! Very well done, full of emotion.

Awesome Steven! What a lucky lady.
Beautiful dedication of love.
Take care!

Very emotional poem, I felt it.
Good Job!

You have a magnificent flow in your poems. Very easy to read. I loved this one.

The theme of growing old together, well that chokes me up when I think of my grandparents.
When grandpa passed away, my granny just stood there, looked at him, and I could have sworn, she smiled a bit.

She must have been thinking something like this poem. She loved him so much and misses him a lot, and like in your poem, looks at the pictures and remembers.
Thank you Mr. Bee

What a beautiful story of love. Excellent imagery. Superbly written.

Gracefully we journey and
together we will grow old, I would
not want it any other way. Loving
you always even till the day I have to go.

This stanza touched me so deeply.
Take care Cindy