You amaze me keep writing!

Good job with your poem and the rhyming, it's really good!

Thank you!!

Wel, well this is just great work. I like those small but powerfull poems, that can get your heart in a single colomn...

esspecialy like the phrase:

Behind unhearing ears,
All they hear is silent tears.

Great job!

5 point added, as it should be!

LM

Sad but enjoyable. I like the style of this its not so mainstream and sounds more original. The last line was a good finish and left quite an impression on me. Nice work :)

This is a really good poem i liked it alot it makes you think and has a hiddin meaning good jog

Another great poem...short yet powerful all at the same time 5/5

Wow nice poem great way of putting it "On a beach we're just grains of sand." I can relate to it alot.........keep writing 5/5
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