Nice poem not normally one for reading anything depressing or love like but i did like it 5/5

if you would please comment and rate my poem (phoenix)

The repetition adds a great effect to it. It's a really tough situation, the one you wrote about. It sounds like you are writing from personal experiences, and if not you really know how to empathize. A cute poem, but somewhat sad. Great job.
~Jaime

So deep. I really like it 5/5:O