Comments : The Girl

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    If U wanna kno what I think on this one I'm gonna edit it a lil and If u wanna leave it as is then thats up to you,

    He's stuck on a girl

    His friends hate him talking about her

    So they throw rocks, knocking her to the ground

    He sees the girl, rushing to her side

    reflecting the rocks, saving her life

    she gives her hero his first kiss

    Leaving the boy utterly breathless

    The boy is now older wishing he was clean

    that one kiss, haunting his dreams

    wishing if he was with her he could get one last kiss
    but nothing will happen, for it's only a wish.......