by emorco08 Feb 2, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
My dieing breath brings me closer to you |
A bit repeditive eric. im not bashing ya buddy since u kno i luv ya to death, keep it up and keep reading other ppl's poems cuz u;ll improve alot |
Awwww.... such a heart breaking poem, yet lovely. Good job |