Lonley Echo

by Casey   Feb 2, 2006


Lonely Echo
Casey Johnson

An echo bounces
From wall to wall
Ceiling
To
Bare floor.
It ricochets off of a cobweb
Searching for an answer.
Sails through a hole
Gnawed open by rodents.
Winds Itself around
A dusty banister
And twists around
An unlit chandelier.
Then finds it's way back
To the rotting floor board
Whose groan
Set it free
In the first place.

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  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Wont rate becuase this wouldnt be fair.. i dont like this poem much, but if this is the type of poem you like to write and you think its good then dont change it but i would totally tweak it... the topic is a good one, just the form of the poem is what i would change... if you edit it let me know and ill read and rate it and comment again
    amanda