Comments : Ruptured (Double Acrostic)

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    This one's good, I admire you for trying out new styles, and most of all succeeding. Well done,
    Talk to you sometime soon,
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely done!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I'd say it's hard. I never thought of doing a double acrostic.
    Anyway, the poem is superb. Nice flow and great word play, nicely done.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly