Hmm.. that is sad and the begining isnt as bad as you might think. Keep up the great work.
Jennifer

Wow,....this is one of those poems that after you read it, you think about your self...and how it seem's to be soo much like you....i can relate to this one also very much so! very good! 5/5

Jeanette

...Great poem, I really liked the beginning and then the rest too. :) Definantly a 5/5