Wow nice, has a nice sense of creepy in it I like it alot!

Brillaint peice, great atmophere (for want of a better word) about it and super imegry.

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I really enjoyed this poem, not only because i have a fasination with creatures of the night, but because this poem is unique and interesting. i really liked your choice of words!
it's been a while since i've read a poem that's not about sadness, and love. well done!
luv em

Wow..... like, wow....... Absolutely remarkable. you are good Ruby, You are good. Rock on!

Suzie

I love it its like a story.
Well it is but, i think u understand what i mean.
=P
It was perfected from the first word to the last, and kept me wanting more and more
love
~Em