by F@n©y Ket©hup Feb 3, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
There's a handful of things in my life, |
Reminds me of my father.. |
Great poem, absolutely great. I really envy how you know you`ve made mistakes and that you`re willing to fix them. I`m sort of interested in hearing more to this story, which can only mean that this poem was absolutely breathtaking. More like heartrending, actually. But i loved it. 5/5, NO doubt. |
by Natalie
This was really good too! I loved the last line "Maybe...I was wishing away my life" |
by Syn
I think the last stanza is good.. but i think the last line needs work.. other then that..good. |
by Juls
Great poem. We all do things in life we regret but I look at it like..if I didnt make those mistakes than I wouldnt be where I am now. Keep your head up high and I think things will turn out for the best in time. Keep up the great work though your good at exressing your emotions. |