Hey. firstly thanks for the comment - much appreciated. this is a great poem, v.sad. only one thing, once you have submitted your poems have a look for spelling errors and sometimes it does weird things when you put a ' .
other than that great poem and thanks again for the comment
Polly

Hey thx for the comment...i liked that poem..it reminds me..someone at my school commited suicide today..it was sad...alot of ppl were crying...I now life can ge bad..but uiide i never the answer...well hey continue to make good poems..l8er

This is so sad, and I hope it isn't about you hun. If so, I'm always here to talk to. Trust me, hurting yourself is never worth it, I've lost someone really close to me due to suicide. She got away from the pain and left everyone else with a much deeper one. This is a great poem nevertheless, and I hope you continue writing. The only suggestion that you should fix are the things like "Sheâ??d finally set her soul free", just because the poem will be easier to read. Great writing hun, xoxo

This is a great poem but so sad, u once told me that a true friend fills a place in your heart but girl beleive me a knife does not never can i should no. i hope this isnt from you an i no prep talks suck but from experiance these things scar and they dont ease your pain at all, they are one more thing to worry about and hide. that is all i will say on this subject that and that erm if u ever need to talk i will always be here to lend an ear. great poem anyhow a defenite 5.

Fantastic poem... and i can really relate as i wasn't too long ago i was like her.... well written... your quite the poet!

She holds it with her right hand
And pulls up her sleeves
Look at the scars of yesterday
And yearning for todayâ??s

I love that stanza.taht was amazing
Great Emotion
And i hope if this poem is true everything works out for the best and your life is filled with happiness
keep up the great work
5/5
~TPOMH~

Wow! I hope that wasn't a real life problem! Like your work, keep it up!