The War Of The Roses

by chicago   Feb 3, 2006


Why do we claim to love
each other but always
fighting?Love is a world
that goes both ways you
could say i love you as a
friend or a step child.

As humas beings we all are
made with the ability to
do as we please.So we
fight when we don't get
what we want because
that is all we seen as
children growing up so
that is what we teach our
kids to do.

And when that dose
not work we go and take
from someone
who is trying there best
to survive without
doing wrong.
And we take from
the elderly and kill
but just not with guns
and knives but with
drugs.

We sell drugs and
stand on the counter wall
somewhere a little
boy or girl is wilting for
there brother or father to
come home and play
or even read to them.

Things happen is what we
tell them then we end up
and Jail if
not dead.But we want
them to forgive us for our
wrongs.But what we do not
realize is that
when we was not there
someone else was doing
our jobs.

Talking our kids to school,
helping our kids with there
homework the whole
nine yards.Then we fell left out.
IS it our fault ?
That we do not know how
to be a man let long a fetcher.
Thats what i call war of the rose.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    I think things should written the way you would say them and being kid who grew up in a drug house i can tell you have real feelings about this

  • 18 years ago

    by italiana

    You are a good writer, but make sure to go over your work and make sure things fit. I agree with all of the things in this poem and hope the others are as good. Keep it up and remember the spell check. Lots of luv! My e-mail is niky_miky@yahoo.com! E-mail me!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Do u mean ur english? I agree with all ur thoughts btw... all of them true... let me kno if ud like help wit ur english man! catch u round
    ruthie xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Well written! great job, i totally felt the flow! you're awesome keep it up! **5/5**

  • 18 years ago

    by chicago

    Im happly you all liked it but what about spoken words.