Personally I think I would have chosen to stay dead and go to heaven rather than come back and go to hell, but never mind about what I would have chosen. This is an awesome poem, Brad. The hardest a person has to do is make a choice, and you depicted that so well.

Oh my golly golly gosh. wat a writer u ave become. im stunned here!!!!!!!! the imagery u used was brilliant. the scenario between urself and the angel was pure genius. even though u aint religious i can sense a religious message in there. keep on writing. and i dont owe you £2.50. i really dont. ur a gr8 poet an u kno it
lol!!! soz i had to do that.
chuk

This is a really good poem, keep up the good work and someone may just discover you

This is an inspiring poem and i think that the choices you gave in the poem were very deep, i like this poem as it shows feeling from the start... well done yet again xx kirsty palmer xx
P.S... i no i said i was going to slag off your poems... i tried but thy are really good... but i will get melittle brother to type something soon... that way it wont matter and i wont feel that bad lol xx

Wow that grapped me inside ..that was more than just a boring car wreck it took accout all things with it good job!!!