Beautifully written. Life is full of "what if's". Don't let them control your life. Live. Laugh. Love. And, share yourself with the world. I love your poem.....you express what everyone feels, whether they admit it or not.

Good poem. its a question that is always on our minds (well, certainly on mine) 'what if'. there are so many situations and so many more answers. its an important question, one which i frequently ask myself on many things, to amny of them i shan't ever discover the answer. well, anyway, a truly wonderful, thought provoking poem. well done

Brad

P.S. thanks for comenting and voting on 'The Choice', i'm glad you enjoyed. i didn't want it to be that long but i just could stop. i felt thestory should be told. well, thanks anyway, and remember...your coments are always welcome

Omg - how true and...I cant explain but it's brilliant. 5/5 =)

Beautiful piece. I loved it. We all ponder on those 'what if's' of life. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Your description of
What if I dreamed a life that isn't real?
Will reality quickly seep in?
is really beautiful. most if us seem caught in this situation, don't we?

lovely writing
godd luck and peace
shobhana

Lovely, mesmerizing write!!!

Ohhh, those things are what I am worried about everyday... But I gurantee that this person loves you, and that you've got nothing to worry about. Keep up the awesome writing, hun! I love your poems! =) xoxo

I think we alll wonder what if...i retitled adn made my poem, longer untitled is now called More Than A Pretty Face..please read more of my poems I suggest Why, Scared to Lvoe you I and II, Won't Sombody Please Love Her, Hold On, Pop-Culture and whatevere else jumps out at you. thnxs hunn godo job love this poem...it jumps out a t me...

XXLISSA

Wow...amazing!! thanks for the comment, it means so much :D take care and stay strong,
-xXx-

This poem is so heartfelt...i love it!

Suspicion and doubt unexpectedly made the poem with such beauty and strength. You deserve 5/5 :)

That is beautiful!!

That is beautiful!!

Ur poem is cute, i feel the same way about my guy!!!!

Very good poem

Dear cuddles....

its a gud poem... but 2 be very frank... this is not the real u.... the real you wrote gr8 poems... i shud say hunger... hunger 4 satisfaction... but sorry 2 say... i felt lack of hunger in this poem... but u can surely do well...