AwW that was so sad. it was really amazing. take care
xoxo
Megan

"People die - old and young, healthy and ill
No one can beat it, no one will"

Powerful message, it really hit hard. You're a talented writer, good poem.

That's lovely. Poems like this are relatable by everyone and the reason that YOU are on my favorites list.

This was an awsome poem alot of passion and it woke me up to....good poem!

Hey, I like this poem. you're poems are so great. Umm I like the format of the poem. I really like the length. The rhyming scheme is different, but it's cool. Usually, for double stanzas, the rhyming scheme is

A
B
A
B but you did

A
A
B
B

Cool, it's nice to see changes and modifications to the rules.. Good job being an unorthadoxed poet.