by Once an Angel Feb 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I wish I could remember the type of poem this was, it had a special title, but I don't remember. The point is that you repeat "as cold as," before each stanza as you read it. Hope you enjoy it! |
The end was o.k. but I loved how you wrote it and it kept me in tune. great write. Love your work. |
by Torn
Wow babe!! this is amazing. ive missed ur work and u so much. |
This is a fantastic peice of work, great use of imegry and description./ |