Wow that was amazing! Pure imagination at work! I actually printed this one out and paested it on the front of my english notebook! I Loved it! Keep up the AMAZING work!

Your poem is very unique and in it's own way it appeals to me! you've done an amazing job with the structure and choice of words! thanks for the read.
luv em

Wow that was coolifiedosityI like imagery :)

I like the metaphors you used, very creative. 5/5

Great poem!

Ur not a cutter if u r u wolud cat ur arm

Mike! that was so awesome! I really liked how u did the whole title thing "dance" etc... AWESOME!! keep it up hun... *hugs*

That was so beautiful. I loved the layout of it. Keep up the good work. You are really talented. *5/5*

This work is very exciting the arena you constructed as your foundation the dance is very pleasing to read very enjoyable.

I like the 'butterflies' line.
Lol, it reminds me of a line I had,
'dance like fireflies' :D
We are cool man, very cool :P

Awesome poem.

Loved these lines-
The pale moon light up the trees,
The feet of the Forest,
Innocent and rustling the leaves,
Playful, harmless, fantasies

beautiful poem!

purva