I like the ending. It makes me wonder who you are protecting, very sweet at any rate. This gives the reader a sense of protection. great job, take care XXXXX
JL

Your poems are so unique (as i may have said earlier) which is probably why they appeal to me so much! well done once again. another beautiful write................luv em

That ones really cool, (Im running out of poems by you to read!!!) It has great imagery and I can see you swinging a blade around....actually I can just see someone swinging a blade around in general. Its one of your best, very medieval. I liked.

V. good

well done

xx

Wowzers!!! that poem was excellent, I always love your poems but I've never read one quite like before which makes me love this one even more. You get the three "E's" lol, Excellent poem, Excellent job, Excellent talent.

I liked the rhymes and inparticularly the last two lines. I begain to drift a little in the middle, between 'Punishing the wicked' and 'When you feel the wind'. I know that's a rather lager gap, but I just think that th bits inbetween could have been much stronger.

Brad