Suicide

by David Marshall   Feb 4, 2006


Life's bad and horrible I know.
But Hell's not the place you want to go.

It's pain and agony the rest of time.
It's heavens ladder you want to climb.

So live your life and change your ways.
Live in rejoice the rest of your days.

There's evil in this world, you just cannot hide.
But please rethink your life before you commit suicide.

Life goes on with many paths to go.
So think it over before your life you throw.
God Loves you, you must know.

Heavens a dream, It's the place to be.
So don't choose Hell over harmony.

I'm not saying ignore evil and let it slide.
All I'm saying is, don't commit suicide.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    AGAIN amazing, TRUE poem. life can be horribal, but nothings as bad as Hell.

    TaKe CaRe,,

    LoTa LoVeN,,

    T!FF@N!

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor Porton

    I don't like your ending line as much, but I think this is an awesome poem. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Hey man, good poem, you know I'm not a beleiver so I'm allowed to commit suicide still :) lol no I wouldn't because I wouldn't want the few people who care to be upset, especially Tia, the first person to die that she knew commited suicide and the second can't do the same, wouldn't be fair to her, anywho great poem!

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