by Alex Marlatt
Hey man, good poem, you know I'm not a beleiver so I'm allowed to commit suicide still :) lol no I wouldn't because I wouldn't want the few people who care to be upset, especially Tia, the first person to die that she knew commited suicide and the second can't do the same, wouldn't be fair to her, anywho great poem! |
I don't like your ending line as much, but I think this is an awesome poem. Great job. |
by Tiffani
AGAIN amazing, TRUE poem. life can be horribal, but nothings as bad as Hell. |