Breaking

by WtrmlnLvr   Feb 4, 2006


Lonely heart
troubled heart
fragile soul

Breaking

twirling thoughts
roller-coaster emotions
can't sort

Breaking

one friend
two friends
none

Breaking

ignored
alone
invisible

Breaking

pushed away
reeled back in
never wanted

Breaking

no trust
lies
hate

Broken

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  • 18 years ago

    by MizCrowley

    I liked it, but perhaps instead of only three lines inbetween, you could have put "breaking" a little further apart.. Loved it though
    Great concept.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hunny Bunny

    Hey this is really good i know how that feels.

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