by Mark Feb 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I sit here on my bed with a knife, |
by DarkJem
Excellent poem 5/5 i can relate to this, it shows alot of emotion well done keep it up. |
Omgosh I really thought this was sad mark!! read some of my poems, they might not be great great but they are ok. some of them are alot like this one. |
by Sweet lig
Wow this poem was so sad... and i feel the emotion this is great! actually sometime i think about that but i realize that life is beautiful and we have to enjoy it.. i really love this poem and i think it written very well and it comes to ur heart great job 5/5 |
by Roxy
Awww!! dont die think of all the people that love you and your poems (aka me i love your poems) there so good i like thi sone alot it can relate to me alot aswell xoxroxyxox |
Nice work! some really powerfull lines here! |