Good write, I liked it. It's very sad, when things work out this way. But at least you've realized that you need to get out of that situation. Some dont.

Its not my favorite that I have read of your work, but I did like it. Just because of the flow didnt really go well. Im glad I read it though. Keep up the amazing work!!!!!
~Juls~

Cool...yea, not worth waiting 4 someone who mistreat u as who u r...

This one it great i hope these are not about the way you fell to the one you are going to marrie. well another 5/5 keep it up

heather

Great poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Nice poem. I really like the line saying "Nights My Eyes Cried Liquid Fire" it's so powerfull. and the flow was good to.
keep up 5/5

I like this alot and hope it isn't based on your life!