Bang Bang

"Bang
Bang
I fall dead[,]
No last words said."

Etc.
I think if you add a coma here and so on through the poem where appropriate it would make the flow better.
It makes "no last words said" much stronger and have more effect.

I personally don't understand the Ex Oh part of the poem but that just makes it more interesting for me to try figure it out :]

"Drip Oh
Drip Ex
I lose you win,
this is the end... "

If this had more rhyme so it would fit in with the flow it wouldve made it flow better at the end.

I liked this poem because it had few words but alot of emotion and meaning.

=)

Wow that was weird but still i liked it good job 5/5.
-Freakfall