Damnnnnnnn! sly thats so...eerie, well done, I love how you started each stanza with a line from that populare.. game -is that what you classify it as? lol- -hug- keep it up brother:D

Jenny

Wow ive never seen anyone put that song together in a poem like that. its brilliant work! keep it up
~cherry~

OMFG that is 1 of the best poems i have ever read! i loved the structure and the darkness of the poem. it was almost as if someone was saying it out aloud to me! deffo a 5/5 from me!