Hey here is a poet after my own heart...but you are different for sure...i've never met a 14 year old who was interested in writing nostalgic poems...most 14 year olds are wrapped up in whatever problems they perceive they have at their age, or looking to the future.

This reminds me of the movie too, particularly the old woman at the end of the film.

well done.

Thanks for the comment ^_^ I loved the title of this, but then I'm a sucker for french. It was a really nice poem, I can sense the movie inspiration and you used it nicely :) Good job

You have some great talent here, Sondos and i think being in a site like this will really take you places.

your titles and imagination are simply wondeful. great going girl!

hey, and sorry i haven't been commenting your poems of late. will definitely start visitng them regularly!

love and peace
shobhana

Felt like i was watching a scene from the movie play out in my imagination. This was very well written, especially for a person your age. You are a teriffic writer and your talent will only blossom with practice (not that you need much...lol)
5/5

Wow. I love that movie and this poem was fantastic, really nicely written and great usage of words.