This is really good. I don't really have much to say, it was pretty long, so I liked it, the ending was awesome in my opinion. Good job. Nothing to say.

Keep up the good work.

Hey! I like the style also, great poem, it was a good read, I'm sorry I don't have a lot too say, I'm new at this commenting thing, I like the poem. Keep up the good work.

Good format, I really enjoyed this poem, I can relate to it alot so thats probably a big part of it, keep it up! 5.5