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by Anne Conner Feb 5, 2006 category : Dark, fantasy / fantasy, mystical
A maiden fair went riding, Out by the palace stream And met a man so charming Or so it would seem. She gave him her trust, And he gave her a veil But she did not know the cost She could not clearly see. Finally she showed him The city's secret stair, That would lead to her palace With no one else aware. But while her father was gone, Terror woke his realm. For with it she had awaken, With a frightened scream. For the man had locked her in a tower To lie in evil wait, Killing all who would save her For she was his bait. Her tower is called distrust And the man an evil liar Because of her lost trust And he the awful winner. Now who was in the wrong? Tell me if you dare. For the man is a proud sinner And I, the maiden fair. One simple question I have Who can I trust? Who will rescue me, From my tower of distrust?
by Lipton
Very well applied to real life, I can say. Whether or not the setting is of a fantasy sort, is has a very real message. Very good! ~Ciao Lipton
by Dani Ward
I quite enjoyed that poem, it's the first of yours that has been fantasy. indeed it was good. ciao~lyn