Hunny

This may not flow, but this describes a feeling I have yet to see in a poem =) you have a very interseting way at looking at the world, and that comes across in all your poetry, well done and keep it up!

Love Jenn x0x0x

I agree with pure silence, you a very talented poet who brings her view across very well and tho it does not flow in some parts on the whole it is very good. take care and good luck in the futur.

Hun thi is briliant i havent read one of yours yet that i dont think is amazing like pure silence says you have an interesting way at looking at the world and putting it into poems it makes them unique and brilliant! xox

Well though the poem is nice but i feel like having no clue of wut excatly is the theme tears,smiles, love or maybe a mixtaure of all that. anyhow, it happens to me sometimes that i lose it.Good luck always

Though the poem is nice i feel that i can't tell wut's the theme is exactly about .love,smiles or tears or maybe a mixture of all that .anyhow , i lose it sometimes as well. thx