The little voice

by .+.unpretty_loser.+.   Feb 5, 2006


Into the mirror she stared,
and wondered, did any-one even cared?
"No,' she heard the little voice say,
she went through this torture every day.

Then one day, she'd had enough,
her day had been, oh so rough,
her fake smile gave her no satisfaction,
and she wondered when her life had been this complicated.

She couldn't handle it, if only she could,
"Die," said the little voice, and die she would.
on impulse she grabbed the knife,
never did anyone think she'd take her own life.

into the mirror she stared
and wonder, would any one care?
she gave the mirror one last kiss,
and wondered would she even be missed.

as they found her lying there, dead,
they kicked her stomach, they kicked her head,
her lonely eyes just stared,
but they just left her, no one cared

plz comment i'll do the same

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Wow...really great...i love reading your poetry...:)

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted faith

    Awww this poem is so gd. you've done a gd job here. i just hope u neva have 2 feel tht way

    blessed be
    rachael xox

  • 18 years ago

    by UnWaNtEd

    Hey great poem.. i really feel the emotion and i know how you feel. . i totally understand! much

  • 18 years ago

    by kendra

    I really liked it, but 'did any-one even cared?' that dosent make sense =) & you commented on my birthday poem.. yeah.. it's true =(