Lovely!

Wow that poem was amazing - great read, keep up the great work!

I need a helicopter
or a rescue plane
to fly in here and save me
but no one understands

Those were my favorite lines, they add that meaning to the tile of your poem. This was a good poem, although, the "No one understands" get's kind of tyring after a while, I think it would make a greater impact if you left it at the end, It would also make the flow of your poem a lot better, that's what I think, but poetry comes from your heart, and it's your poem, those are just my thoughts on it, either way, I get the message your trying to say, overall, great poem.

Great job...Loved it once again..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

WOW so far this is the strongest nad one of my favorites of yours.. I LVOE ITS PERFECT DONT CHANGE A THING...lol

lissa

No let it out then they hear then they can understand keep it up

love

Excellent - the repetition puts power behind the stanza's and emphasises the pain that the poet is trying to convey. Beautifully written.

Peace. [Sole]

Fantastic... I really like this poem, def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Clever title here. Few grammatical slips here and there but overall a good poem. It could have dug a bit deeper to bring out the desperateness of the situation rather than starting most lines with 'I am' or 'I need'.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I know what you're going through, you feel so alone because nobody really understands you.

Your poem is really sincere, and I like the way, you ask for help, but don't ask, at the same time...You need help, but you don't think it's any use to ask for it.

Great job! 5/5

Great Poem...you could feel the desperation in it...It was just amazing...Nice Job...
Emma 5/5

The repitition made it sooo powerfull i loved it very nice work keep it up wow beautiful i love all your poems cause you write with passion

Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

-Laura

Wow this is really good!

I relate a lot to this... I like it alot for mostly that reason, but also cuz I think it's good. I like the repetitive use of the last line, and then the slight change of it at the end. It made it sound kind of songy, but that was nice. 5/5

Ravyn

Let it out,,
let it be heard,
dont hide it
one day,
some one will,

understand...

Awee this one is good.