by Weeping Wolf Feb 5, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Laying on a runway in LA |
by Katt
Awesome poem! I can feel the strong emotions in this poem. It's shorter than your other poems and just as good. -Katt |
by JL
I thought this was good, a little abrupt though. Maybe one more stanza or something for closure. I like the repeated part, great job! take care XXXXX |