Help!!!!

by Amanda   Feb 5, 2006


Please help me to get out of this mess,
get rid of the pain and all of the stress,
Show me that life can be better than this,
help me do the fun stuff I shouldn't miss,

Be my friend and tell me I will be alright,
when I'm crying comfort me and hold on tight,
When I'm scared tell me you'll always be there,
say you love me and tell me that you care,

When I want to give up don't let me go,
tell me I'm stupid, let your love show,
When I do something good tell me you're proud,
when I do something bad, scream at me real loud,

Give me support when I'm feeling really sad,
give me advice when someone is treating me bad,
Keep me holding on strong until the very end,
you are my everything, my only real friend.

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written, the rhyming is very unforced and it flows well. the feelings are very dtrong in this and clearly expressed.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    I'm always here sweetie....a sad write...that touched my heart.
    love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    That was a great poem im sure u hav lots of friends lots of people to comfort u xoxo be happy 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Katt

    Wow! That was such a good poem. That's is good message for all friends and I love how you made it rhyme every line but it doesn't sound cheesy.
    -Katt

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl l0t 0f heartfelt w0rds in this piece. very sad n deep.

    l0ve always d0ra