by Amanda Feb 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Please help me to get out of this mess, |
Very well written, the rhyming is very unforced and it flows well. the feelings are very dtrong in this and clearly expressed. |
by Ann Stareyes
I'm always here sweetie....a sad write...that touched my heart. |
by sarah
That was a great poem im sure u hav lots of friends lots of people to comfort u xoxo be happy 5/5 |
by Katt
Wow! That was such a good poem. That's is good message for all friends and I love how you made it rhyme every line but it doesn't sound cheesy. |
by dora
Hey darl l0t 0f heartfelt w0rds in this piece. very sad n deep. |