by Bill Turner
What a beautifully written poem. You have such talent. |
Kim, |
by Melissa
This of so beautiful and the flow was amazing! Perfectly written, simply breathtaking! |
by Ann Stareyes
Beautifully written and the flow superb. Great job. |
Hey babe! i think your a great writer!! i really do! your excellent! please look at some of my poems and comment on them too1 thatx babe! |
by Suri dawn
This is very well written poem...your an awsome writer,please keep it up!Good Job! |
Wow this poem is so amazin u did gr8!!! |
by AI
It's been a long time since I've been to this site, even longer since I've read a poem. Not sure why I came back, but luckily for me I did. Cause never have I come across someone who's had such brilliance when it came to the use of words. I give you credit for your talents and that’s all, HA HA… no seriously, you're an amazing writer. Keep up the good work. |
by shobhana kumar
I simply loved the last stanza. you have great talent!! |
by Emily
That poem was great Kim I loved it... Keep up all the great work |
by Darien
Ohhh Kim! It was really sad being away from P&Q. I'm glad I made you join!.. You have done so well, and now everyone can see your true potential! |
by jed
This is probably the most bittersweet tale of lost love ever- amazing... |
by Natalie
I liked this ALOT! I thought the flow was really good. Your wording aswell. And, the imagry. You've done a great job on this!! Keep up the great work! 5/5 |
by Marc Ortiz
OKAY!! I really love this poem! this is one of my favorites now :) I love the imagery in this poem! good job! 5/5! |