Couldn't stop typing.....

by ~*im_the_best_at_ruining _my_life*~   Feb 5, 2006


It's hard to notice the differences in the sky
when your staring at the ground
tears fall will i catch them as you cry
in your eyes i stand with a frown
my heart aches as u lay in darkness
i cannot live like this anymore
when i see you i feel worthless
when your with me it hurts down in my core
there are no angels waiting for me
your watching every move i make
I've never felt more alone , u cant see
if you could only see what you take
i wish i could tell you I'm in pain
the words just don't spite my lips
never knew you'd drive me insane
surprised you haven't seen the rips
i gave my heart to you
"I'll try," she said
i was such a fool
as she walked away never turning her head
it's hurting you but it's killing me inside
to be with you tonight
i wish i could confide
for once lets talk never fight
break all your promises
walk home in the rain
your no longer welcome on these premises
you are no longer my pain
you are someone else
i am still the same
sitting on the top of the house
waiting for perfection
it will never show
your life is filled with corrections
is there anyone hear i know?
no one shows there face
I'm lost without a trace

just started typing and here's the finished product ....i guess

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    It's hard to notice the differences in the sky
    when your staring at the ground

    [I loved this part]

    And I DID love the poem.. It spoke with such emotion and is so sad.. You're definately going on my favorites.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    That was a great peom hun try putting ur poem in blocks.........xoxo Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Good poem...rythme is great...i really like this poem...write more:)

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