Good poem...rythme is great...i really like this poem...write more:)

That was a great peom hun try putting ur poem in blocks.........xoxo Rach

It's hard to notice the differences in the sky
when your staring at the ground

[I loved this part]

And I DID love the poem.. It spoke with such emotion and is so sad.. You're definately going on my favorites.

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